Saffron Wave


Chapter 4 Page 4

This was another revised page, it (somehow) both was and wasn’t changed a lot, if that makes any sense lol. I switched the order of the panels at the top and bottom because the pacing felt weird to me, and I redrew the bottom two because the lack of action was bothering me alongside the odd pacing. I’m much more pleased with the revisions (obviously, I wouldn’t be doing them otherwise) and hopefully this lends to a better flow overall.

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