This page I redrew entirely! I changed the script here to make the conversation seem less dire and the old art didn’t fit anymore, so I redid the whole thing.

I also have been experimenting with a “new” way of inking (just using a larger brush so I get more varied line weight) so I ended up redrawing this page 1.5 times, I first got to the inking stage on my original comic template but something felt off somehow so I experimented with drawing on a larger canvas and I liked it a lot more! But I had to redraw what I’d already done to fit the new page size so it ended up being extra work.

Hopefully it doesn’t look too different from the preceding pages (it shouldn’t, it’s not like I changed my art style completely) but I feel like the quality is better. Idk if that’s evident at all or even if the shifts in my art style are noticeable, I might just be overthinking it because I spent like two weeks wrestling with this lol